i can’t find myself
when I find myself
wanting you
like i want you now
i can’t see myself
when I see myself
needing you
like i need you now
i can feel myself
when i feel myself
missing you
like I miss you now
i can’t find myself
when I find myself
lost in you
like I’m lost right now
jwturner
missing you
5 responses so far ↓
inwardsun // February 25, 2009 at 2:44 pm |
I read so many of your poems not knowing which one to comment on. So here I am saying, they are all beautiful, honest and inspiring! I love your writing.
Jeff Turner // February 25, 2009 at 11:24 pm |
Thank you for speaking up.
Poetry is very personal for me, so when it speaks to someone else it’s very rewarding.
inwardsun // March 27, 2009 at 12:24 pm |
I just re-read this one…and is blown away about how perfectly it fits my state right now…thank you.
Jeff Turner (@respres) // April 6, 2009 at 7:48 am |
So glad this poem connects with you!
nopabloneruda // April 6, 2009 at 5:57 pm |
Hi Jeff – I’ve started posting poetry online and wanted to find other like minded writers. When I came across your blog I was thrilled. You’re a wonderful poet. I particularly like this one..